from: 101 Classic Love Poems
poem by: Amy Lowell
I walk down the garden paths,
And all the daffodils
Are blowing, and the bright blue squills.
I walk down the patterned garden paths
In my stiff, brocaded gown.
With my powdered hair and jewelled fan,
I too am a rare
Pattern.As I wander down
The garden paths.
My dress is richly figured,
And the train
Makes a pink and silver stain
On the gravel, and the thrift
Of the borders,
Just a plate of current fashion
Tripping by in high-heeled, ribboned shoes
Not a softness anywhere about me,
Only whalebone and brocade.
And I sink on a seat in the shade
Of a lime tree. For my passion
wars against the stiff brocade
The daffodils and squills
Flutter in the breeze
As they please.
And I weep;
For the lime tree is in blossom
And one small flower has landed on my bosom.

Amy Lowell. I got this image at:
http://www.terebess.hu/english/img/amylowell.jpg
ANALYSIS:
There is rhyme in this poem,but there is isn’t exactly a rhyme scheme. It kind of rhymes randomly throughout the poem. For example, “train” and “stain”. There is also near rhyme :”blossom” and “bosom”.When she said “And the daffodils are blowing” this is an example of personification.
SUBJECT:the girl/speaker and the fashions she is wearing
OBJECT: The girl is in a garden and is describing her trim in detail
AUDIENCE: general,those who care
PURPOSE:She is dressed nicely and is in the garden because she is trying to be beautiful, but she feels her beauty is not perfect, therefore, she weeps
SPEAKER: The weeping girl
TONE: depressed,pity, she feels incomplete
I really like the way you analyzed the poem. When you said that she feels incomplete,it really showed the you looked deeply into the meaning of the poem.
-Sabrina